To Whoever Reads, I Need Your Help

by Saving Grace   Dec 15, 2008


Dear Reader...

I need you to know, Im asking for your help,
This isnt just a poem, its a serious cry for help.

You should know ive been to hell and back,
To end up back here on an even sh*tier track.
Ive attempted writing down, the pain i feel, deeper then my skin,
But words just dont do enough justice, for the hurt i feel within.

There have been people, who have simply walked away,
So i need to know what to say to you, so you will realize, im really not okay.
Im at the point of which, im balancing on the edge.
Im asking nicely for your help, cause im about to fall from the ledge.

If youre kind enough to attempt to help me out,
I should warn you i need your trust, without having a single doubt.
But i will always do my best to stay strong and never break,
BUT to do so i need you to understand, theres not much more i can take.

I want you to realize, this pain has taken its toll on me,
Im well and truly ready to break, why wont anybody see?

Dear Reader...

Please dont read this, and think its not at all real,
Ive put it simply that i need you now, and its exaclty how i feel.

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  • 15 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    Your work is amazing i just keep goin to the next poem cos i like your writting!
    if you ever need to talk i'm always here for you!
    well done xo

  • 15 years ago

    by Kuro

    Writting poetry in itself can be very difficult because it requires skill in rhythem and rhyme and well as a sense in grammar. all of which you seem to do well in.

    BUT!

    what makes your work exceptionally well is your ability to describe such emotions easily and put yourself into your work. you really put a part of yourself into this poem and it shows. it was well written.

    as for your suicidal thoughts, we all have a purpose in our lifetime. and killing yourself is not your purpose. you obviously have a gift for poetry and have experienced some painful things in your early lifetime. why not use your poetry to express your feelings and help others who might feel just as bad as you do?

  • 15 years ago

    by Tammi

    I am here I have a great Idea what u r going through so give me a shout plz here is my e-mail cometkid_73@ yahoo.com

  • 15 years ago

    by Libby

    Woah, Your work is amazing!! Your really talented! 5/5!!! :o Phenomenal!