Woah, Your work is amazing!! Your really talented! 5/5!!! :o Phenomenal!

I am here I have a great Idea what u r going through so give me a shout plz here is my e-mail cometkid_73@ yahoo.com

Writting poetry in itself can be very difficult because it requires skill in rhythem and rhyme and well as a sense in grammar. all of which you seem to do well in.

BUT!

what makes your work exceptionally well is your ability to describe such emotions easily and put yourself into your work. you really put a part of yourself into this poem and it shows. it was well written.

as for your suicidal thoughts, we all have a purpose in our lifetime. and killing yourself is not your purpose. you obviously have a gift for poetry and have experienced some painful things in your early lifetime. why not use your poetry to express your feelings and help others who might feel just as bad as you do?

Your work is amazing i just keep goin to the next poem cos i like your writting!
if you ever need to talk i'm always here for you!
well done xo