Comments : Sweet Lotus Flower

  • 16 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Message is clear, sometimes we wait to long and the love or person we desire is no longer there. Good job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless

    Awww tts was a sad poem indeed.The choice of words that you used truly conveys the emotions that you want to bring out in the poem

    Excellent Job
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Captivat3d

    Very simple and short but still great! :P

  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    That was so sweet. Although it was short it was full of meaning and very beautiful write.
    I love the metaphor of the lotus flower. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    A Love that came too late. Sad.
    Always your poems contain a message Ingrid, which is why they are so delightful and interesting to read. You are a wise woman!
    Nicely penned in your usual style Ingrid.