Thank you mohammed!

by NoUr   Dec 15, 2008


An exhausted body, red swollen eyes,
Damaged heart, Yellow face,
Sleepless nights, Aimless days,
Ran away our dreams, replaced by nightmares

These are just his simple gifts for loving him
Oh! How sweet of him for returning the favor
I am just waiting for the scars to be healed by time
Together or apart, my destiny is to suffer

I need to gather the pieces of my broken heart
Then teach it not to be kind, naive and innocent
I will be treated from his pain addiction he left
Then building a new clean life will be my target

Enough...I had more than enough
You left no place inside me for more scars
It is impossible but I will pretend I forgot our love
How lovely! I have nothing left but broken promises

As much as I miss the one inside you I used to admire
As much as I hate the creature you transformed to...

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  • 14 years ago

    by mohamad aref numan

    Very deep,touchy and wonderful

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I am glad for you this poem is no longer how you feel!

    Hugs, sweet girl:)

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow hun this was filled with so much emotion! I could just feel everything you were expressing with your words. We've all experianced a love where the person turns out to be not who you fell in love with but you should know hun that you deserve soo much better.

    "I need to gather the pieces of my broken heart
    Then teach it not to be kind, naive and innocent"
    ^Oh boy could I relate with this, I love how you worded it.

    Well done!
    *5/5* hugs*

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Waw,its realy beautiful .
    u start it in way makes me see all the story and how you loved him and how sad is to lose and get broken heart, i know this feeling too,you are great writer and i hope to read more of your work soon, be strong and i hope you keep it along

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Nour,

    it seems to me this man did not deserve you at all, sweet faced princess..be glad he is out of your life.
    One day a man who truly deserves you will swipe you off your feet, mark my words..good things come to good people eventually:)

    Much love and a warm hug,

    5/5 Ingrid

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