Nour,

it seems to me this man did not deserve you at all, sweet faced princess..be glad he is out of your life.
One day a man who truly deserves you will swipe you off your feet, mark my words..good things come to good people eventually:)

Much love and a warm hug,

5/5 Ingrid

Waw,its realy beautiful .
u start it in way makes me see all the story and how you loved him and how sad is to lose and get broken heart, i know this feeling too,you are great writer and i hope to read more of your work soon, be strong and i hope you keep it along

Wow hun this was filled with so much emotion! I could just feel everything you were expressing with your words. We've all experianced a love where the person turns out to be not who you fell in love with but you should know hun that you deserve soo much better.

"I need to gather the pieces of my broken heart
Then teach it not to be kind, naive and innocent"
^Oh boy could I relate with this, I love how you worded it.

Well done!
*5/5* hugs*

I am glad for you this poem is no longer how you feel!

Hugs, sweet girl:)

Ingrid

Very deep,touchy and wonderful