Sadness

by Daisy   Dec 15, 2008


Sadness takes away your feelings,
Leaves them at the bottom of the lake,
Your sadness, is never healing,
You're even when you're not awake.
Sadness is a burden, of the world on your hands,
You never mention your sadness,
Apart from the one who understands.
Your life is never happy, without sad,
Then I suppose, life is only half-bad.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jackie

    I can't believe you are 11, your poetry is very good. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by jescelle

    Wow... 5/5!
    i love how u put it... life is only half bad...
    very nicely done, beautiful piece!
    Jescelle

  • 16 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    I must say that I admire you very much, you have a great talent, and from your poems I can notice that for your age,you're really mature.
    And the words you put in this poem are very true, even when we're happy,there's always this one thing we're sad about, but, we never tell that.
    Keep writing, you're doing it great.
    I'll be reading.
    5/5
    Carla

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