I must say that I admire you very much, you have a great talent, and from your poems I can notice that for your age,you're really mature.
And the words you put in this poem are very true, even when we're happy,there's always this one thing we're sad about, but, we never tell that.
Keep writing, you're doing it great.
I'll be reading.
5/5
Carla

Wow... 5/5!
i love how u put it... life is only half bad...
very nicely done, beautiful piece!
Jescelle

I can't believe you are 11, your poetry is very good. 5/5