Each time you post a piece I read something wonderful. Again you didn't disapoint me with you're unique expression aswell as style. The meaning behind this poem was of course deep like always, and yet I feel as though I can relate to each line.

"I'll shoot like a meteor

into nothing"

I find your poetry to be most amazing and create a traquil feeling over me as I read. A beautiful write, Melissa.

-Mel

Great poem with good language use,well done x

Very deep and beautiful piece ... I guess you mean much more with your write...

"but a tittle of dust
flickering
in someone else's dream "

^^ so wonderfully penned... beautifully expressed...

keep writing :)

Oh, wow that was so lovely. I loved you gave the star personification. I feel like this poem is a bit mysterious too. Like the star is a metaphor for yourself. That was very clever and your words were very well expressed and beautiful. 5/5

This was an amazing piece. You are a very unique writer, thank you for the pleasant read.

-alissa

That is very beautiful, Melissa. :) I loved every word of it. 5/5

Deep and wonderful..this poem really twinkle......well written.

Hi Mel, been awhile! Happened to stop in and caught this gem. This is really a fantastic piece- love everything about it! Has a melancholy feel. The last two ending stanzas are awesome, so powerful. I'll have to pop in more often- you've always been a favorite - I forget how many wonderful poems are here for the reading!

Love it, I'm going to start studying your poetry me thinks.

I love going on my little adventures with your writing and you've got so many poems to keep me ocupied.

=)