Peace and depression together. Those emotions i have never seen together! and you pulled it off. Great job! 5/5

Whoa. this good. btw remember me?

5/5

I personally didn't find this piece too pleasing, because it just felt forced, like you were forcing all the lines to rhyme, excluding the last stanza, but I do think the passion was there. Maybe a more relaxed feeling would really help this piece, but that's just my opinion. Other people seem to love it.

Brad

P.S. I'm glad you liked my poem 'The mask'. I think that's why so many people like that poem, because it reminds them of themselves. They can relate to it, and I think it's important for people to be able to relate to things, whether it's poems, quotes, songs, films, etc.