Is it a love story?

by Sweetdream   Dec 15, 2008


In this story I feel like I'm missing my cues.
Have I misread the text?
Is it all skewed?
Or should I believe what I've read in you...

Between the lines weaves the web of plot,
With different inflections sub-text is sought,
And from behind a curtain,
Foreshadowing peeks its nose out.

But as the main character I don't even know...
Is our story narrated form above?
And is this even a story about love?
Could my happiness be sarcasm in some satire scene?

Possibly your sweetness is just an attempt at irony,
And my trust then becomes a laughable thing,
Or perhaps it really is the addition of a little contrast?
It's real, proving even the worst streaks of luck won't last.

This story flows with such an air of truth,
Still I can't shake the feeling my story should be asunder,
And so I can't help but wonder...
Is this just verisimilitude?

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Very touching. Extremly Captivating. I had to read it twice because of how amazing it was.

    Truly Amazing!

  • 15 years ago

    by Xxsk8r gurlxX

    AWESOME!!
    Hey i really like this poem
    kEEP UP THA GUD WORK

  • 15 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Wow!

    Is our story narrated form above?
    And is this even a story about love?

    This is a masterpiece itself ^_^

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by emad

    Good one rach
    " i have read love's history 10 times but i couldn't read the last line " is that what y want to say ?
    rach i couldn't read it smoothly it misses something but still nice
    very good lady