Creative write, greatly penned.
I like your ideas, you are always able to come up with something unexpected and refreshing.
The fact that you said so much within such short poem is quite impressive.
The imagery that you created here is very vivid, and captivating in many different ways. I can relate to this write, which made it even more effective to me.
Overall, you managed to capture astonishing beauty and heartbreaking sadness within one poem.

Keep up :)

A short, yet powerful piece of writing, I really enjoyed it.

"The fragmentation of the stars,
they all glitter down like snow."

^Beautiful imagery

The whole poem was just fantastic and I like how you ended with the beginning.

Keep up the great work!

Hi, this poem i thought was very interesting, i lied the starting and the ending, thats a good style and different. it worked well. nice simple title relating well to the poem. good work xx