Comments : Tripping Me Up

  • 15 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    I like it very much 5/5 :-)

  • 15 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    I love this title, considering usually tripping means falling, but you said up instead of down, very nice. The poem in the entiretywas a very pretty form of art. I enjoyed the way you spoke of love and the way your poem presented it being all the things that make you fall for a person. The only little thing I would suggest is to broaden your vocabulary. I remember when a few people gave me this advice and it really helped although it took me awhile to get it down, even now I'm not completely used to a stronger vocabulary. I really enjoyed this poem. Thanks for commenting my poetry, I added you as a favorite so I can check in and view your poems and comment you back!

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow Cara, this was one of the best poems that I have read. I really loved the clever way that you wrote it. You really put a vivid picture in my mind of how much you love this guy. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    Great poem! I love it! Keep up the good work...

    It takes a lot to give away a heart and trust someone that they will not break it...great poem!

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    I really enjoy reading this poem. So many of us can realates to this topic of love. There are not another feeling that brings so much comforts and desire to the mind, than love. It makes us go beyond our wildest dreams for the one we love. Very well done Cara. It merits 5/5, keep it up, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Aww thats a very sweet poem Cara and i'm sure your friend nust have been very happy to have recieved it.
    Love does strange things to us does it not?
    Well written

    Grant

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Wow this is really sweet.

    From the first time you spoke to me I knew this was true
    I could tell your love for me, nothing could undo
    You are like a little kid, tripping me up
    Because baby I feel head over heels for you

    My favourite Stanza ober awesome

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    Some of the lines are too common and very much known. I didn't find any new creative approach on those. So according to me it's good in parts. Just my personal opinion... that's it!

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    This si a great pice and you outdone your self in this
    it have been a long time since you writen ,it is really missed
    you chosen great adn simple words to say
    what you feel for your love and in what way

    you should be proud you write simple and clear
    and you was not shy , and from courage and not from fear
    bravo you outdone yourslef this time
    it is very gdo that you spoke up not like a mime

    great you deserver the five on this part
    and you shall get it by god from all my heart

    5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Aw! so very sweet indeed!
    I am sure you melted his heart with this sweet dedication of love:)))

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Sweet action poetry. like an awsome movie you know. lol 5/5 in the book of great poetry.