Comments : Twenty miles

  • 15 years ago

    by Blissful

    "To sweet to say."
    ^ "too" not "to"

    Overall this poem was a sweet love poem. I could feel the emotions you were expressing because they felt so real and your words brought them to life for me. Your rhyming was good and the flow was nice although in some place the rhyme seemed forced but it wasnt that noticable. Your use of imagery was great and effective in getting your message across. Sometimes distance makes relationships weaker but when the love is true and pure, distance will actually make you two stronger.

    Good luck.
    Well done.
    *5/5* :]

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Awww this was a very sweet poem. I must say i like how you paint your poetry. You have a good imaginery and very creative with your words..Keep up the good job

    Excellent work
    5/5 from me