PLEASE RATE OR COMMENT...

P.S. THIS STORY IS TRUE
HE WAS MY FIRST LOVE
AND I WAS HIS. AND HOPEFULLY
ONE DAY MY PAIN WILL GO AWAY

BABY EVEN THO YOUD NEVER READ
THIS MESSEGE...ILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU
AND YOULL ALWAYS BE A PART OF ME...
BCUZ AT ONE POINT I WAS THE HAPPIEST GIRL
ALIVE AND WIHOUT U I AM NUTHING </3

I didnt wann read it but im gald i did it eminds me of me and my man been togtehr for 3 yrs but he trreats me like shit he makes me feel like i dotn belong like thrs no reasn to live liek im always wrong thats my own little quote but i loved it your a real good writer

It isn't the type of piece I'd normally read, but I was pleasantly surprised. I thought you did a good job capturing the emotions and letting them filter through. It flowed together flawlessly. Words should've been spelled out instead of abbriviated. In my opinion, that would have made the poem better. Other than that, it was very well-written. The emotion in it made it obvious that it wasn't a fabrication. Nicely done. 5/5

Wow!!! this is really good it so describes me and my ex.. i was so i love with him and i still haven't completly moved on even though its been 3 months...

I love this poem, it reminds me of my ex and me. We used to be the couple of the year, but then one day everything changed. It'really really good. I love it!!

I love this it also explains me n i my ex we were like picture perfect in front of everyone then at home at nights i would cry myself to sleep because of the way he made me feel about myself. it's very good it flowed perfectly and i could practically taste the emotions. a definite 5/5 keep up the good work

I know how to feel. Reminds me of my first love too. It's hard...

If you ever want to talk I'm here

This is great keep writing I think it's a way to lower the pain. You have a great talent

Its really good : )

Wow.
I love the ending.
amazing flow.
overall, nicely written.
keep it up :)

This poem gave me the chills when I read it because I can relate to it so well.

This poem is absolutely wonderful and i give you a 5/5. The writing is amazing and the flow of it was wonderful.

Keep up the good work!

WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!
This was one of the greatest love poems i have read.... I loved how u set the rhythm and flow in it and its sooo profesional lolz... u r a great writer...keep it up :P

Wow it's good aND I KNOW WHAT YOUR GOING THROUGH AND IT SUCKS
REALLY GOOD DON'T STOP WRITING

Wow that's srong. I now how hat feels. My feance and I were like hat and hen he did of cancer. Now I'm dating someone else and I feel so right wih him. I jus hope and pray that he feels he same way about me.

This is an awesome poem and is very heartfelt
The rhythm and flow is really good the words are amazing I love this!

Tihs poem really is amazing! the flow in it is so good! and the way you convey your feelings is awesome!

Great poem(: Sort of easy for me to relate to.

Respectfully Edward's,
Cherish Rose.

P.S. Boo. Too bad you don't like Edward Cullen. I love him. ):

This is your best, your a good writer keep it up (=