Who are you?!

by SweetGrief   Dec 16, 2008


There's so many I wanna tell you
but sometimes I'm afraid to hug you
your hands are so cold
and I'm on my knees begging you to relax

what was the mistake?
You are acting like a fighter
is it really you or you're only trying to fake?
I'd give you my soul if that would make your heart brighter

You're sitting in the corner watching the world
your face is so pure, like you were born yesterday
sometimes I get afraid when you open that door
but your face seems like a lover that is killing himself...

I'm still looking for the answer?
Who are you today? Are you waiting to the stars to shine?
Give me a sign, to feel your heart beating
then I'd know, that you are the same as you were yesterday

I'm trying to do my best
but your emotions are so silent
are you a human being?, what have you missed?
Try to hear the silence, and forget all the rest...

I'm on my knees looking for the stars to shine
maybe you'll see your way, and it would hand you emotions like yesterday
I'm sorry if I have ever hurt you
I just want you to know that you hurt me the same

don't shut up, open your heart
I'd carry you all the way home
just please lets go back to the start
cause' I love you more than life can mean...
just please give yourself a chance, what have you seen?
you're stronger than the soldiers of the queen...

well it's not finished yet, i just wrote cause i really had to write it... if u got a good advice about the writting i'd love to hear it :)!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow i can feel the sadness of this poem.It really has a very good storyline.Yup i agree that the story still hasn't been finished coz it kindda feels hanging...but i believe that only you could finished it. So yeah i hope you do finish it coz i can't wait to read how it ends