I see the darkened skin
But her eyes are full of color
I approach her on a whim
For her love i wish to devour
I see the world in her eyes
And her eyes everywhere in the world
Deep within their recesses lie
The soul of a beautiful girl
They say eyes are the windows to the soul
I find that to be true
For through those eyes i met you
And in turn love you too
All the beautiful pigments accentuate your beauty
You make me feel so special whenever it is you look at me
You are truly an african queen and a daughter of mother nature
A gift from the rainbow
In the storms you are my shelter
A gift from the rainbow
In the storms you are my shelter
I really like those last two lines. :]
I liked the descriptions in the poem. I wish there was more of a structure though. I know you have rhymes in some parts, I just like to see a little more structure in poems, that's just me though. Other than that you did a pretty good job. :]