by Fantasy Dec 16, 2008
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
With this poem, i would love to have some criticism, its the rough draft, and its kinda important, i will take any comment into consideration, so, please, feel free to speak your mind. |
by SheenaMarie
Superb write 5/5 |
by Stephen
This is a very good piece of poetry, the best advice i could give you is though, it needs some rhythm into it, if it had a nice flow, it would be by far one of the best i've read on this site.. keep your head up and keep comin with the good work.. you got talent sweetie |
by OmniLotus
=) i read it like 6 times back to back. love the end stanza. <3 |
by OmniLotus
=) i read it like 6 times back to back. love the end stanza. <3 |