Beating For My Suicide

by Grunge Angel   Dec 16, 2008


Surround me in your presence
Anticipating pain
Ground me in your insolence
What is it that you gain?

Crack the whip before me
Make me wince away
The twisted sickness in your eyes
From your violent play

Slice my body open
Watch my skin draw tight
Bleeding out my lovely wounds
That you gouge deeper here tonight

Having satisfied your craving
Push me to the floor
Hounding me for pleasure
Begging me for more

Sore from this fiasco
Tired of these games
I'll end it all right here tonight
So you can watch me drain

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Slice my body open
    Watch my skin draw tight
    Bleeding out my lovely wounds
    That you gouge deeper here tonight

    *This was my favorite stanza. Everything about it draws my attention and makes me want to read more. I think this was one of your best poems. It had so many emotions, all clearly expressed. I love the dark imagery as well. Nice work. Nik*

  • 15 years ago

    by XxFailedxForgottonxX

    Hey this is really good
    Keep up the good work
    5/5

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