True art is Free (Haiku)

by Ashleigh Skye   Dec 17, 2008


Painting the sky red,
the sun finishes its work,
just in time for dawn.

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PLEASE COMMENT AND VOTE THANKS A LOT

*Haiku-usually about nature, has a strick syllable count 5,7,5*

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  • 15 years ago

    by Teria

    I really liked this haiku. Sometimes I think it's hard for a person to come up with a nature related poem that can be summarized in such short word usage. The syllable count is definitely at an all time low , yet you have to make the emotion, the imagery, the flow at it's all time high. Which sets a challenge for the writer, a challenge that you have succeeded in quite well. (: