by Cluadette Dec 17, 2008
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Look at us |
by Saving Grace
Aw this was really good. It reminded me of my brothers graduation this year. I knew most of his class so yeah, it was actually kinda sad. But anyways, lol this was really good, it flowed well but the rhyme scheme could maybe use a bit of work, although it sounds really good like this though??. Apart from that though, excellent work. Keep it up. 5/5 |