Graduation...

by Cluadette   Dec 17, 2008


Look at us
Look where life has bright us
Look at you
Believe in what you can do
Its been four years
Since we started here
And youre graduating
And post-secondary is waiting
Dont show them you're afraid
Always be at someones aid
Dont let people push you around
Dont let yourself fall to the ground
Dont let life pass you by
Never be afraid to cry
Its good to
Its not bad, its true
I stand here and look at you
And I begin to cry
For my life is passing me by
So many of you friends
Yet so many foes
Some of you helped
Some of you said no
I sat idly by and watched as you grew
Seeing this amazing sight you made me grow inside
And I now sit here and watch you leave
I fall to my knees and plead
That you never give up
I know you all can succeed
No matter how hard it gets
Never forget
That if you believe
You will succeed
And grow
Into the people I know
That you can be

ok i know this is a repet from before i just want to know what people think of it Now to compare so please comment and rate it means the world to me!!!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Aw this was really good. It reminded me of my brothers graduation this year. I knew most of his class so yeah, it was actually kinda sad. But anyways, lol this was really good, it flowed well but the rhyme scheme could maybe use a bit of work, although it sounds really good like this though??. Apart from that though, excellent work. Keep it up. 5/5