Black anguish

by Goodbye   Dec 17, 2008


Black anguish
Feeling of someone walking over your chest
Keep pressuring your heart, it is hard to breathe
Something is wrong and you can not name it
Your hands refuse to move but you can not stop
You are finding an exit to escape, running out of the box
Being aware of your consciousness
Thinking a reason to stay but can not find it
You are helpless with your thought
Being left alone.

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Dedicated to people you tend to suffer for anguish.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    This was excellent. I wish I could write that well. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Anguish is the pain of emptyness .. where our thoughts and the guilt feeling face our feelings in such a trembdious way so our body , can not explain or handle so he break down

    every one of us in this world will face it sooner or later and you tend to pin point every single details about this feeling

    great poem wish it was rhyming !!

    CJ

  • 15 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow,what a wonderful poem,it was so touching and sad.I didn't know about that illness,but it seems to me it's some kind of torture.May allah heal every ill human.

    well done...

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