Very touching poem :(
such a sad topic but you captured the emotion well and worded it really movingly. well done xx 5/5

I liked all but the last line, it was kinda random. Good story line though, despite the sadness, and the emotion was very well shown.
*Chaotic Angel*

(Btw, you might want to switch around the words "go" and "grow" a bit, you repeated them a bit too much where it wasn't necessary in my opinion....)