Azzza,

I see a whole new you here!
I wish you and the lucky lady much happiness and I can see she inspires you to write beautiful stuff, so keep it going!!!!!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

That was so beautiful Azzzza. Every word was so sweet and meaningful.

"Just three words I need for a confirmation it's true...
I love you"

The three words I have wished so long to say
I shall no longer hide in my heart or delay
You are my soulmate and dream come true
Let the stars shine as my witness as I say:
I Love You

Beautiful! Your words were filled with such meaning and love that I could tell it came straight from your heart. The rhyme was great and your use of imagery gave the poem a nice touch.

Well done!
*5/5* :]

"A call from a distances"
[ A call from a distance]
OR
[A call from distances]
- 'a' = one. adding -s = more than one.

"Cause you seem to found my weakness"
[Cause you've found my weakness]
- I actually liked how you had the original line laid out but it didn't go with the poem too well.

This poem is great. Overall it flows quite well. It definitely captures attention and is relatable (which I believe is a HUGE PLUS in poetry). I liked the third and fourth stanzas, they stuck out to me big time. You did a really good job with this poem.

I like this one. Good job keeping up the rhyme scheme for that long. Not terribly easy to do.
Thanks for the comment. :)

I'm sorry, but as I read your poem, all I cold think was "meh". It flows well, it just seems maybe a little to sugary sweet for me, or maybe it's just the way it was presented, that it did not seem unique to me. Sorry

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)