by megan Dec 17, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I never meant to make you cry, from all the stupid things I do. |
I really liked ur poem megan and specially the last part,,,and its true and relationships R CONFUSINGGGG |
by Raychil
I did like your poem. You had very powerful emotion and you told s very tragic tale. However, my critique is I think you should space your stanzas a little more. The rhyme is good and the rhythm is there, you just have to give it a little better spin. A wonderful write though. |