I did like your poem. You had very powerful emotion and you told s very tragic tale. However, my critique is I think you should space your stanzas a little more. The rhyme is good and the rhythm is there, you just have to give it a little better spin. A wonderful write though.
<3Raych

I really liked ur poem megan and specially the last part,,,and its true and relationships R CONFUSINGGGG
sumtimes u feel ur doin ur best 2 keep him near ,but u figure out tht u drivin him away unkowninglyyy:(
and its sad how all of us at certain point in our life we just give away our happiness for the happiness 4 the ones we luv:(
megan tht was gr88
keep it up
5/5 <3