Comments : What Happened?

  • 15 years ago

    by CrossCut

    "You left me with a shattered heart.
    I wonder what drove us apart.
    Sometimes I wish I could hit restart."
    ^^My favorite three lines.

    Overall, I loved it. Nice flow, emotion, and meaning. Good job, 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Loveless Dreamer

    I loved this. it was perfect. had nice rhyming and such beautiful emotion. i felt much pain reading this. its going into my faves. great job!! 5/5

    *Val