Comments : I'm sick and tired

  • 15 years ago

    by HvN

    Nice to hear from you again, 5/5

    keep up the good work,

    welcome back!

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Your words are very powerful. anger n hate. but i can relate to this poem too. tired n sick of all the bulls**t around you. that u cant take it anymore. like a ticking boom is in you but we can hold on to them. they might make our life sucks n bullshitty but thatz life. very well done. Keep it up!

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 15 years ago

    by LiveLoveLearnDie

    Wow this poem is full of amazing words that have been put into a powerful context. It was a great read as everything is realistic and just what your thinking.

    I'm so sick and tired
    Of all this Bullsh*t
    I'm so sick and tired
    Of being in the middle
    I'm so sick and tired
    Of being the one everyone has to blame
    there sh*t on!
    ^^
    This is my favourite stanza because you pin-point everything head on. It's really good that your venting your emotions, as we can all clearly see through this poem!
    Great job!