Great poem, "angel" is spelled wrong though

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5/5

Nice poem, reasonably good flow :)
The only thing i noticed was in the title,
you wrote 'your'
it should be 'you're or you are'
well at least i think so..

nice work :)

It is too good. I really enjoyed the read. The title is wrong though. Your = You're. But you got it right in the poem so that's all that really matters.