Him

by iFallToPieces   Dec 18, 2008


The longing I have,
In my heart,
Just to be with you,
Through the night

The blade its sharp,
So it cuts too deep.
Maybe this time,
He will hear me weep.

I stay awake,
So I dont dream,
If I close my eyes,
Ill start to scream.

The blade its there,
The pain I cant bare,
Maybe its because,
I dont have you here.

Im falling in love,
So deep you cant see,
Just how much,
You mean to me

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    This was soo good. all of your poetry is filled with emotion, so i can tell it comes from deep within your heart.
    Just maybe, try to fix up the punctuation a tiny bit. Because some words read differently when they do not have punctuation in them..
    like 'hell' does not mean ' he will' it means.. well hell. haha.

    Awesome write again hun.

  • 15 years ago

    by xx

    This poem is definitely easy for me to relate to. I like it, it flows easily. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by togetherforever

    Omg!!!
    i relate to this sooo much
    its amazing.
    i really love it.

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