Omg!!!
i relate to this sooo much
its amazing.
i really love it.

This poem is definitely easy for me to relate to. I like it, it flows easily. 5/5

This was soo good. all of your poetry is filled with emotion, so i can tell it comes from deep within your heart.
Just maybe, try to fix up the punctuation a tiny bit. Because some words read differently when they do not have punctuation in them..
like 'hell' does not mean ' he will' it means.. well hell. haha.

Awesome write again hun.