Very good! I really like it...its well written..flows well and keeps my attention! def. a 5/5 from me! =)

Ok, first of all, bravo, what a materpiece. It really was fantastic, although i feel bad for you, if this is really what you are going through.
just one thing:
But, Baby your too late.
^^
Should be you are. or the abbreviated version.

Other than that, a stunning poem. Awesome write dahl.

Wow I totally love this Tragic Love theme poem of yours. You have penned it down beautifully. You really have a way of bringing life your your poems.Throughout the whole read i can visualize the whole drama that was going on between you and your lover.
I love the way you end it though it was tragic, it was totally splendid.

Excellent Job
5/5 from me