by XxBloodxXxDreamsxX Dec 18, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I dreamed that I was lost in the woods. No way out. Trees holding my freedom. I screamed and screamed but no sound came out. Darker and darker as the sun goes down. I awake to fright. Laying on the floor, I grasp for breathe and grasp the air. Where is my hero? Feels like I've been dieing forever. My heart has been cold, won't let nobody in. Shivering to the heat. Afraid to let go of my past, afraid to let the future broaden. Weak with regret. No chance of beating fate. Forever I will lay without soul. And just in that instance, hands picking me up, lips touching mine and I can feel alive. |
by Baby Rainbow
Ohh i loved this well done! i dont normally like this style of layout but i think in you case it works. i loved the intense imagry you have used and the fast pace. lots of short sentenses building up the poem, well done. great job x |