Excellent write, well done xx

Wow, this was amazing. I wouldn't find any parts really that were wrong grammar-wise, it was awesome. To me, there was a few parts where the flow was a bit.. rocky, but it came back and was really good. I liked it, the rhyme scheme was perfect. The emotion in this just blows my mind, this was so heart felt, and i loved your choice of words, so touching, its just a heart breaker. :[ But i loved it, it showed so many different emotions and at the same time there were two that stood out the most, Love, and Sadness. Amazing.
*Chaotic Angel*

Very nice. i really like the lines "And I found my heart stuffed in a drawer, next to a picture of you and me.Where the echo of past laughter" and the end is good.

drowns out the sound of my new enemies.

Wow.. so emotional.. love it.

Wonderful... :)

Pretty well written...

4/5

Although this was very heartbreaking, it was very good. i thoroughly enjoyed reading it, and almost felt as if i were in your shoes. great job :)

This really pulls the heart strings. I totaly understand this feeling. Hope this isnt based on real events... if so, stick in there. But... anyways, great write 9/10. Keep it up!

Heartbreaking. But the title really catches people's attention. It's very well written. I love it. When I read the words of this poem I can feel the pain deep inside. Keep up the wonderful work!

Ghost

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