by Poe Syndrome
Great poem!! great use of words! it was awesome! keep writing! : ) |
Well, thank you for letting me you wrote a new poem. I was actually very impressed with your ability to rhyme and have great words.. and not make it seem too cliche or boring. This poem really was great.. the word choice was extremely well. I was pleased how the words were bigger and better and rhymed perfectly. |
by Nobodys Hero
This was a very good write, all your stanzas had a nice flow and the rhyming was very good! Overall a really enjoyable read this is a very good poem =] |
by El
A very good poem. |
by Darien
Ok, well. I guess I could start off with saying this was very different. Unique? Not quite. |
by Ingrid
Tabi, |
by Nula
This is amazing! <3 well written |
by schylar
You're vocabulary in this is amazing. |
Overall, this poem was very well thought out and enjoyable. |
by pixie
This is excellant |
by Jennifer
Wow! amazing...i wish i could write like this...how do you do it? 5/5 |
by isabel
So, this is what I've become. |
Trully a masterpiece, i love it!! and the last line is like the cherry on the cake!!! same time next week? brilliant! |
by Katie
"So, this is what I've become. |
by kelleyana
Waw, this is absolutely wonderful. I am greatful to come across your poems. All i can say is that you'd done a brilliant job. It merits 5/5, keep it up, kel. |
by H E Losey
This is a good write, you show a nice vocabulary though I'm not sure the general reader could assimilate your meaning in the first few readings. Your rhyme scheme starts well then goes off and comes back, consistency. The read is difficult due to the lack of metre/rhythm/flow in places line syllables are important to this. |
by Teria
"Crisp flashbacks of perfectly" |
by H E Losey
Interesting, a compilation of adjectives describing one lovers rantings of the other's perception. |
The rhyme scheme is perfect unforced the lines flow as if they are not depending on the scheme I feel that it is written to a real person and the emotion comes through with a great choice of words |
The rhyme scheme is perfect unforced the lines flow as if they are not depending on the scheme I feel that it is written to a real person and the emotion comes through with a great choice of words |