I Absolutely love This Poem!!
You Really Put Some Effort Into it
5/5- I mean 100/100

It is really a masterpiece-
*I love Your Choice Of Words*
_Brilliant_

Wow i don't see how people can see any thing wrong with this one i really loved the first and last stanza's

i hope to be a good writer someday
awesome work keep it up :)

Beautiful flow!
loved this poem
5/5
xo

This piece is good, however, I don't think it's your best. While your word choice is, once again, excellent, your rhyming is off in a few places.

"What an amusing puzzle with
insignificant forgotten pieces.
Somewhere you discovered
rare reactions without ceasing."

= I'd work on fixing the pieces/ceasing bit. It kind of throws off the flow when the rest of the poem rhymes and there are a few places where it doesn't. Also, stanza 6- conclusions/emotion.

Those are the only things I find that I feel should be fixed. Everything else is great. Good job. :)

``Briana

An excellent write from an good poet. I loved your choice of words. You used a very wide selection of vocabulary, which is always nice to see. The structure was very good and well put together.

Overall a great write that obviously took some thought to produce. Excellent work as always, keep up the great work. You have a lot of talent, and I'll be back to read more.

Peace, Joe