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by Lonely Rider Dec 19, 2008 category : Life, society / inspirational
Fight that never ends Groomed in cradle of hope, glittering dreams alive Enduring destiny's blow, struggling to survive Treading the path unknown, to let the visions unfold Roving clutches of failure, scheming to withhold Unremitting fight continues, dodging every strife Final milestone to conquer, of jittery mortal Life.
by H E Losey
Well told story using fine words and rhymes. I would suggest working on the metre/rhythm to insure a smooth read.
by Corinne
Very profound and very succinct. I like the economy of words. Well done
