by Rodney Kirby
I like It Crystal, Your work is changing a little, good. |
by rebeccasarah
Amazing. |
by LoreNz0
The sky's the limit with your poerty, im left astounded after every line. as always the flow and description is precise, you paint a picture in the readers mind with bright colours and sweet scents. another 5* fowshow =) |
by Corinne
A lovely, sensual poem. |
A very nice poem, very sweet and sensual, though your last 2nd last line made me falter a bit when reading, like it was missing a syllable or something. Overall though very enjoyable, I especially liked your second stanza, good description. Keep up the great work. |
by SashaMirage
Wow Crystal, your words were so hypnotic. Every line had me mesmerized. Everything about it was so perfect. I loved the rhyming and it seemed to flow from within you. 5/5 |
by Sourav
Sensual and sweet! I liked the way you've expressed your thoughts. It's a real good write. |