Aww thats really moving, well done. i can feel the emitons flowing through. this is great work, keep it up xx

I like it =]

"I always look back when I get sad
To remember you're smiling eyes
Nothing now, can slow me down
You're memory, keeps me alive "

Last paragraph, Loved it.
It ended your poem wonderfully
It was touching
Oh the power of memories
5/5