Comments : Teenaged Infants

  • 15 years ago

    by oddi tea

    So completely true! I love it because it is not just a story but something that is happening here and now in the world. It is very well written and an amazing idea behind it. Kudos. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    I really loved the title. It really made me curious as to what the poem was about, which made me more interested in reading it. I also like the content in your poem.
    The flow was a bit off, especially in the second stanza.. but overall it was a good poem.
    Its true though, the message in your poem. Adolescents are caring more and more about their appearance and less and less about morals and values. Not all of them mind you :)

    very well done.