I really liked this poem that you wrote. The rhyming effect made it sound perfect and the flow was good, making it easy to read. Whatever I thought was there
Is now too hard to see
The search that it would take
Needs too much energy"

Those were my favorite lines. 5/5

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I really liked this poem, and felt that the simplicity of it added to the emotions. My favorite stanza was this:
"My heart doesn't have the strength
To look for what it can't instantly see
So it's ready to let go,
To let you slip away from me"
I've felt this way before, so I could relate. 5/5