Wow, dont know why you were worrying about people going easy, this poem is really great. honstly. and your language is amazing through out and kept up a good steady pace. keep it up. well done xx

You were kind to me with your comments in the past. you have nothing to worry about. i thought it was wonderful and wished i could have written like that when i was your age. check spelling and hurry back with some new poems.

Beautiful language,sharp emotional descriptions. clearly written by a genius with a heart :) I kinda like it a lot