Little usage of words but deeper the meaning within those words. The way you are writing the poems, I don't think the day is far when your poems will feature on the homepage of this website. Keep writing

Regards,
Bhavin

This was very unique. I really loved the wording.. although there wasnt many words, you didnt need them. you expressed all that needed to be said using few words. It was fantastic. One of your best pieces i would say.
5/5

This was very unique. I really loved the wording.. although there wasnt many words, you didnt need them. you expressed all that needed to be said using few words. It was fantastic. One of your best pieces i would say.
5/5

I really liked your poem
it was cute

I liked this, the meaning was deeper and it was just long enough. I liked the way you wrote it as well.

A few things, I'm not sure on this one, but should "Antagonize" be "Antagonized" ? For some reason it sounds better.. though, I could be wrong. Also, the last "I" in this wasn't capitalized.

Not many spelling errors, and I cannot find patches where your lines are off... the last part... was, not as good, as the rest, you might want to reread that one, other than that.
Amazing Job.
*Chaotic Angel*
5/5

Aww this was so beautiful! The truth and meaning behind your words were flawless and the way you worded it all completed the poem for me. Great flow and use of language. Loved it!

Well done!
*5/5* :]

"Antagonize

By your pleasure, breathtaking moments that I treasure
Ones that I'll always remember that engrave in my heart forever."

Excellent rhyming choice, and the style/format of this love poem drew me in. The sincertiy of your words ring throughout each line.

"Laughter

You bring that melts all sadness away
Pushing me to think tomorrow will be a brighter day."

How sweet, this made me smile!

"Verbal

Expression of appreciation, compliment, praise and thanks You gave, makes my self esteem rise and I'm the happiest woman i can ever be."

The "i" should be capitalized near the ending, and I liked this ending, I think it could have been better, but its still very lovely. Nice work, 5/5 from me...

Very nicely done. I have never seen a poem written this way. It works well and is very easy to read. short and sweet

Antagonize

By your pleasure, breathtaking moments that I treasure
Ones that I'll always remember that engrave in my heart forever.
^^ very unique way of describing what you felt! i loved it

Laughter

You bring that melts all sadness away
Pushing me to think tomorrow will be a brighter day.
^^ the person that captures you in that way is definetly a keeper : ) i wish you the best

Verbal

Expression of appreciation, compliment, praise and thanks You gave, makes my self esteem rise and I'm the happiest woman i can ever be.
^^ : ) thats what i want to find! someone who brings out the best in me i am very happy that you found someone like that i hope and pray it works out

very unique and beautiful poem! 5/5

Cleverly crafted and the love your husband and you share just shines in these words, Kel.
Bravo on this beautiful poem of yours:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

I love how you crafted this wonderful piece, I can feel the euphoria that you feel when you penned down this poem.Just Beautiful;)

Excellent Job
5/5 from me

Another 5/5
Keep it up,
regards,
Shokry

Another 5/5
Keep it up,
regards,
Shokry

Kelly , from readion this poem , i knwo that the man or person intend to be described is someone , more then spcaily ,
raising your self esteem , pushing you to be happiest women ,

i can not think of a more expreession of lvoe and i deep beleve that if somon love another perosn , he will do exact the same ,.

you was right to title this poem like this
2 hearts and a single soul;

and from your description , i deeply understadn what that man mean to you ,

one soul , in 2 bodies.. acting like 1

great one lvoed it ^_^