Once More

by ether   Dec 20, 2008


Covered in rain, hail and shine;
Holding hands skipping on the cracks in cement.
Dirty streets with pure intentions?
Who is in a position to answer our calls?

Widened eyes are the answer
Disconnect.

These revelations are behind cold doors,
The things I used to say must have tempted you
To put your grip of fire on them.
Open. Warm.
Connect.

You taught me, harsh as the blades on industrial fans:
Tread gently on unsteady sand. Or not go there at all.
Locked myself inside my comfort zone,
It doesn't feel as safe as it should.
Needs more words, written about you.
All the time they are there,
Inked, they play like a tattoo;
But I cut them out of my mind.

What better time than now to
Disconnect.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Ok let me say about this poem , i can say the idea was good te expression was good

    butttt

    the structure was not good and the rhyming was nearly not present .
    this poem have many petneital but with litlle more effort she will be great

    hope you fix it

    ^__^

  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    I just love this..
    it's more than I thought it would be..
    First off, the flow went really well..I mean REALLY WELL.
    I couldn't find any flaws in your piece.
    I love the last lines..or shall I say line. it took my attention of the world just to focus on it.
    very well written
    Write on
    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Rolo

    I love the way this is written. Your words are set and have meaning, but at the same time I can sense some sort of confusion and disarray. Nicely done :] 5/5.

    -Rolo

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