All the bad things in life
Doesn't need to make you run

It should be don't instead of doesn't. :]

The last few lines were pretty. It was a very simle poem, but it was happy, and nice. :] Five out of five.

Just don't fly to high. lol. I liked this poem, different to my taste buds, but good none the less. keep it up, And I might read more. lol. AJ - super natural of fort wayne. (Long story)

This poem has been beautifully written and it does give a good message that we do not need wings to fly.
This poem tells me that even if we are surrounded by hardships we can live a happy life by looking at the bright side of everything.I love how you tell the readers that they need not run away from the bad things in life.We just need to look for the rainbow....search for the love around and within us.
Very well written.keep penning.