by mostafa Dec 20, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
My head hurts ,My heart aches |
by Mylah Malana
..such an amazing piece..i enjoyed reading it and i really can relate to it.. |
Good work |
by Sarah Ann
Wow, this was such a beautiful piece that spoke to me in so many ways I could just feel the hurt and pain coming out of your words. Great imagery. Keep it up and thank you so much for your comment =] |
by Heba
What a wonderful piece.It was so amazing and really touching.We all feel depressed in some occasions in our life,but we can get our selves out of it by keeping our hopes and dreams because one day they shall come true. |
by SashaMirage
Your poem was amazing, It was full of emotion. The rhyming was perfect and the flow was very smooth. I loved the ending. |