Your poem was amazing, It was full of emotion. The rhyming was perfect and the flow was very smooth. I loved the ending.

" never thought emptiness could fill up so much space
hopes and dreams are all I'm surviving for all these days
numbness spread out of my heart to touch my frozen face
i feel like giving in but the sun keeps sending me warm rays "
You really described what it feels like to be without the one that you love. 5/5

What a wonderful piece.It was so amazing and really touching.We all feel depressed in some occasions in our life,but we can get our selves out of it by keeping our hopes and dreams because one day they shall come true.

Excellent.5\5...

Wow, this was such a beautiful piece that spoke to me in so many ways I could just feel the hurt and pain coming out of your words. Great imagery. Keep it up and thank you so much for your comment =]

Good work

..such an amazing piece..i enjoyed reading it and i really can relate to it..

good job!.keep it up..: )