Comments : One Way Out, No Way In

  • 15 years ago

    by HvN

    You are incredible, teach me? :]

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Fire Catches

    I loved this
    keep writing
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Flood's of grief crashing down
    Like the waves of the ocean blue
    One way out, the survival guide
    Contradicting death so true

    *This was my favorite stanza. It's so intense. It's just overflowing with emotions and imagery. I loved it. Great work. Nik*