Absolutely stunning. A beautiful love poem.

A very mesmerizing piece, that captured their love. Wonderful emtions and your words were so beautiful. Nice work, keep it up! 5/5 from me, take care...

Well i am not a fan of this kind of poems , but i can see a good picture drawing here,

you took a very nice image and express it a good way ,

maybe it be better if you split them into stanzas , .. but i loved the expression !!

very nice work dear

Beautiful expression of love! I liked how the lines were short because it fasten the pace of the poem and left me curious as to what comes next. Great choice of words and imagery. A wonderful read. :]

Well done!

*5/5*

So soft and tender is this piece you have written. Wonderfully done.

sadaddy

I'm glad I'm sorta active these days that I had the chance to read this sensational, mind-blowing piece =)
I so lovey the simplicity in your wording and the length of the piece made it even more powerful !
I love the last part, you and Soso always make me feel like I wanna read more love poems ^.^

Very well done sweetheart :]
Write on

This is good!
Again, great imagery in every word of this loving poem. Great expresion, along with such softness and tenderness in your words.
I loved it!