That was very beautiful and heartfelt. I liked how you opened the poem with the first line you wrote. I could really picture how good Jason is with you in my mind. Great write. 5/5

Very touching piece, I can see you guys are great together! I would work on your flow, it was a bit choppy in places, and in a few places you used Spanish, that confused me. I wouldn't mix the languages, just use all English. Otherwise than that, this was a good piece and dedication to Jason, you described things nicely. 4/5 from me, take care...

Incredible poem. Such emotion, hidden within each word. I really enjoyed this. Keep up the amazing writing.

Great read. 5/5.

-Droplett.