by CanUKissAwayMyPain Dec 22, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Loving you makes me smile from my heart. |
This was a very cute poem. At first the structure scared me a little but I read it and it's cute. I Like it. The emotion behind it is plain to see. =] |
I liked the repetition in this poem, the flow wasn't excellent, but the imagery was pretty good. The structure was great! Nice write, I really enjoyed the read, keep up the fantastic work. |
by PoetryKnight
Never mind, I forgot that I already read this one and commented the same thing lol. |
by PoetryKnight
I wrote a poem with the same title, different poem but this one reminded me of mine. I like yours and you are getting a 5/5 on this one. |
Dis reminds me of my f i wish he was my bf though excellent 5/5 |